More Than Just the Five 'W's

by Mike Rubin

One of the first things that a budding young journalist learns is how to write in "journalistic style." This perversion of the English language is also commonly known as newswriting.

In eighth grade, I first learned newswriting when I took a journalism class at Hawthorn Jr. High in Vernon Hills, Illinois. We put out a dinky little "newspaper" of several typed pieces of paper with some cutesy clip art cut and pasted (with scissors and glue as opposed to command-x and command-v) together before it would be xeroxed by Mrs. Worman because only teachers had access to a photocopier. Then we would pass out the paper, known as the "Eagle Eye News," to all our classrooms.

I still have one of those papers somewhere in one of my boxes.

You see, Mrs. Worman also taught us budding young newsies the key tenents on writing in journalistic style. Every news story must contain a lead paragraph, she taught, that contains the five W's: who, what, when, where, why. Later "how" would be added to that list, but that's the basic start that any journalist, whether he/she is in eighth grade or is a senior reporter for the Washington Post, must follow.

Learning how to be an effective newswriter is just one area under the massive umbrella of Journalism. I want to reprint here the editorial I wrote for the issue of the College of Lake County Chronicle that comes out tomorrow (issue 9, 3/7/96), in which I have attempted to make the case that being an effective journalist involves more than making sure you have the five W's spelled out in a concisely written lead.

I have sent this e-mail on to certain people as well who figure very prominently in the battle for the freedom of expression. I do not know most of them personally, as I am not a software developer of any sort. Most of them are people whom I admire and respect. I do not want to name them, suffice to say that one of them includes President Clinton. This might be one of the most important e-mails I have ever composed.

Before I repost, let me give some background information:

First of all, the College of Lake County is located in a suburb of Chicago called Grayslake. I work for its college newspaper, a bi-weekly publication called the Chronicle, as the In-Depth Editor. For 1995-96, the CLC Chronicle operated under a standing budget of $46,000. $25,000 of that is set as a base, provided by the CLC Student Senate via the student activity fee every CLC student pays when taking classes at the college. The rest is supposed to come from revenues generated by the newspaper's advertising. In several weeks, we will be coming up short on making our advertising goals. Thus, we will have to go into budget negotiations with the full knowledge that the Senate will very likely challenge us on our shortfall of funds.

Now, the Senate has been very weak this year and is very much an irrelevant, forgotten presence in this college's life. Thus, we have taken this opportunity to write an editorial that constructively criticizes the Senate for its shortcomings and makes suggestions for improvement. Our timing is admittedly a little off, considering that we are about to lambast the very same organization we will be shortly requesting money from.

In the past several days, Senators have come forward to privately urge us not to run the editorial. They fear a bloodbath of sorts will ensue. In addition, our advisor fears that in an unprofessional fit of pique, the Senate will feel indignant and deny us our funding as a way of proving their authority. Our own staff has had many debates about what it is right and what is wrong, and whether or not budgetary concerns should even be a consideration.

In the end, we have decided to run our critical editorial and the one reposted below. We believe we are acting properly by standing up for our beliefs in the face of the threat we face from budget cuts.

And now....

Please think about this editorial the next time you hear criticism about the media not taking its job seriously, especially those in the newspaper business. Indeed, not all journalists are evil. Some, like me, love what we do and attempt to uphold the very best of ethics in every sense.

If you'd like a copy of the issue when it comes out, I would be more than happy to snail-mail one to you. Please provide your address in your reply and one will be sent promptly.

Thank you,

Michael

Michael E. Rubin zooropa@wwa.com